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Story — two versions

Watch Marcus review Ana's two front sketches. He likes the second version, then flags the color.

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1. Afternoon light hits the long desks. Ana sets two library-front sketches down.
2. MarcusOkay. Let's look at the fronts.He wants to start the review now.
3. AnaThese are the two versions. I can talk through them.She brought two options and can explain them.
4. MarcusDon't take this the wrong way.I am not trying to hurt your feelings.
5. AnaGo ahead. I want the honest notes.She is ready to hear a hard note.
6. MarcusOverall, this is working well.Most of this is good.
7. AnaThat's a relief. I was stuck on the doors.She feels calm now. The doors were the hard part.
8. MarcusThis part could use a small change.Please adjust this one area a little.
9. AnaCan you explain this part?Please tell me what this part means.
10. MarcusI think the color is too bright.The color feels stronger than it should.
11. AnaDid I get that right? The red on the doors?She checks that she understood. She means the red doors.
12. MarcusYes, exactly. It fights the brick.He agrees. The red is too strong next to the brick.
13. He slides a quieter color chip across the desk.
14. MarcusWould it be better if we tried this instead?Should we change it to this other option?
15. AnaA quieter color. I can try that this afternoon.She will try a less strong color today.
16. MarcusI like the second version best.The second one is my favorite.
17. AnaI'll go with that one, then.She will keep the second sketch.
18. MarcusGood. Three sentences. That's the plan.He is happy. The notes were short and clear.